Discussion of "the other side of alive" by dogdeity11

There aren't may who can spin so well like you do. I understood the meanings of the three rivers and what you meant by the rivers ultimately eradicating human waste, how it can provide a clean slate, and also how frightening the world has gotten, providing alternate ways on how to feel/become alive again.

Thumbs up, Dog.

Dog, this is great. You have this dark side in your writing, a reminder that it's not always sunshine and rainbows. Very moving because you force people to look inside, consider themselves, and feel what you feel, see what you see. That takes talent to accomplish and you do it flawlessly.

Very intense. Very cool.

I loved that it was all covered in death, gore and drama; rather it was an under current of darkness that gracefully flowed throughout it. Very well done. I have read anything of your in a while and I'm realizing now that it was probably a grave mistake. You paint a perfect picture using words! Bravo Dog!

*wasn't*

Stuff that is well written, profound and true...that's where you come from 11. Great, great work here...;o)