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Discussion of "avarice 5" by dogdeity11


1 rico76sgirl 1 year, 11 months ago Reply

Excellent setup! Very realistic dialogue too! I'm definitely intrigued by this type of storytelling now. And you do it so well!


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1 honeygloom 1 year, 11 months ago Reply

Is it wrong to hate Ray more than Dennis?


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1 writerwannabe 1 year, 10 months ago Reply

Yes, honey, it is...;o)


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