Discussion of "October Chill: Emptiness (3)" by dogdeity11

"‘Its sad baby, I know. No one should have to die. But sometimes it’s necessary.’ My wife assures me." Clever preacher? Or is his wife getting revenge? Fantastic as always:)

Bingo baby! Thats for the next Masher to decide.
Personally...I hope they go with REVENGE!
But not for me to fret over anymore...I'm off to the next story. What will it be this time? Let me guess...an EVIL PREACHER. "oooohhhh....Ahhhhhh"
thanks for the comment HG.

Holy ****, dog.... THIS>> WAS>>> SUPERCALAFRAGELISTICEXPEALADOCHES....or some really effin' great word like that! I've plumb run out of superlatives. Just killed a lady that gave him a ride and says, "The last thing I need is to lose my mind"...priceless and such a good leave.

"But it was short lived" - there sure is lot of that going around. :-)

I read this a while ago but didn't have a chance to comment. Do you dictate your stuff? It just flows from head to key just like you spoke it. Are you in one of those headgrabb'n wheelchairs where in years past you had to have a pencil in your mouth to type but now you've got the eye-laser model? Sheeet mon, you turned this into another epic. Excellent pacing and this dudes insides are all over the page. A++

Wow, I have no idea how to continue this, but I'll give it a try...

As always dog, you a a master storyteller....5 man 5.