Discussion of "Day 11: Until its time for your life to flash before your eyes" by dogdeity11

DOH! Was trying to edit and accidentally clicked publish. So, your gonna find more errors on this one than usual. Crap happens.
This was actually the second chapter I wrote for Day 11. I spent a few days on the first one only to realize I wasn't at all happy with it. I will post it anyhow as it is for the most part done and I don't want to just delete it. Someone might actually prefer it to this one. who knows.
Anyway, thanks to theblackhand for putting together a fresh idea for the site. I'm proud to be a part of it. I've enjoined reading all the additions so far and look forward to this storyline continuing on.

PLEASE IGNORE THIS CHAPTER. DO NOT READ IT. DO NOT VOTE FOR IT!
GO TO THE OTHER ONE TITED THE SAME. THIS WAS POSTED BY ACCIDENT DURING THE EDITING PROCESS.

thanks-

Glad you posted I was wondering what was going on, thanks for letting us know.