Discussion of "avarice 2" by dogdeity11

Truly superb writing Dog! I have never read a story in reverse so on the first chapter, I think I just kind of took it at face value. However, I do have one problem now that I have read the next chapter; what happens AFTER chapter 1? (Which is really the ending, so saying after chapter 1 is a bit awkward because I keep feeling the urge to correct the number of it, LOL, and you can just ignore this parenthesized part here dear, because I am silly to be talking myself through a comment, huh?) I am definitely planning to read the rest of the chapters, but if that was the end, then I am disappointed to not get the rest of Ray's story. : Let me just finish reading here....

If Anthony bought the ticket with cash, she might be free and clear... long as she lives under the radar in Latvia or something. If he bought it with a card she'll never be able to claim the money... so for what it's worth, I think the story is going in just the right direction.