Discussion of "Day 11: Superhero (1)" by dogdeity11

2		Acee_Andrade 3 years, 7 months ago Reply Anthony takes more turns than a crazy straw, you gotta love it. Dogdeity, I liked this story for many reasons, but the suspense and pacing by far won the day. 5
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2		Persephonie 3 years, 7 months ago Reply Now THAT'S what I'm talking about. You moved the story forward a bit and kept context of confusion, added some mystery....SUPERB!!!!!!
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