Discussion of "Fate's Fight:10 - Exeous, Toro, and Nico" by dkk4510

Sorry, before anyone notices, there is a question mark at the very bottom of the story that's not supposed to be there. Copy and pasting problem I guess.

Great job and you finally gave me a little of what I've been wanting - background. Allbeit, not the background into the Daughters, but the three Brothers were very interesting! I love the characterizations you gave them. You could take this so many ways now! You could even start whole new stories branching off from each one of the boys! Very cool.

Yeah, I guess I could, but this 'branch' is gonna be all about a few of the Daughters. Thanks!

p.s. you'll get more info on what you were wanting soon, scout's honor!

Good job, dkk. I like how you told the brother's stories (at least, partially) in the setting you chose. It fit perfectly...lol.

As LadyLuck commented, you've opened several more doors, any of which could carry the storyline in a different direction. That's way cool!

Thanks WWB! I'm glad you think so, this story has become close to my heart.

Well done, Dkk. You did well in giving both mystery and depth to your new characters. I look forward to reading the physical and emotional reactions of the characters as the Daughters and the Brothers interact. :D

Good, that's what I wanted! LOL

Whoops! I put the comment meant for this one, on number 9, the one before it. Sorry.

Yea, I went back and got it! LOL It's okay! ;oD