I don't know why it took me almost a year to read this, but good job! Tone and pacing was a match, character was excellent, although I'm not so sure about "the voice" (as I like to call her) suddenly being able to move and feel Emma's body and senses. But I liked it, just didn't see it coming. I loved the new characters added, exspecially Ollie for some unknown reason. Great job and thanks for mashing!

Thanks Dog, and yeah I know... grammer, BLAH!

Thanks for commenting Ace and Dog!

Thank you for your comments.

Soon, I have to put the little guys in my head to work organizing everything; its been so long since I've written anything!

BJ, you take me to another world in such few sentences. Well done!

I'm back, with new ideas sprouting out my ears! You've been warned. lol ;)

JD, whom I aspire to write like, you've been busy! :) I loved this, symphany of words and wonderfully put together. I'm so happy to be reading your work again.

I come back, search out my old buddies' work, and I am so glad I did WWB! Pacing -- spot on, and humor and you go hand and hand as dark twisty things go bump in the night, which is also you. Although I didn't see much if any darkness, but this is an on going thing, so I'm sure at some point you with throw us a curve ball or two. Glad to read something of yours again friend.

Uh, not sure what to say, but this is dkk's husband and she asked me to post this for her so that every doesn't think she forgot or ignored everything. She is in the hospital for awhile. She also asked me to say, with a smile, "don't go freakin' out". She is okay and will be fine. I'm sure she will explain once she is home. Thank you.