Discussion of "Robot" by djinndarme

LOL short and sweet and to the point. Enjoyable and a nice twist of definition.

Thanks, Hebe. I had a different chapter written out, but I thought this one was more... unusual.

hebe stole my line. Short and very sweet. :)
I like the hairspray comment too.

Good job! My favorite part was the hips moving to twelve and eight! Loved it! I knew this was the word for you!

Thanks Syn and DKK. I was hesitant about posting this pseudo-haiku-ending-in-a-couplet, but writing it was fun. Guess that means I need to sign up for DKK's next challenge.

Very nice! I would never have expected a poem, I love it:)

Excellent portrayal of your word. Very creative. I would never have thought to use dance and poetry for a word like Robot. Well done.

very cool. The robot is my all time favorite dance. People literally beg me, um, not to do it. Well done!

This was ok. Needs some more lines to really get the feeling of meeting someone on the dance floor. More anticipation and more of the great feeling that comes with connecting with someone through dance.

Peppz makes a good point, but I feel like the anticipation wasn't the main draw of the piece, it was the dance itself. Loved the "hips to twelve and eight" bit, great line.