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chapter 1, part 2: demo song  by demeonte
demo song 

isn’t there a way to make you love me true 
to get the strength to give you closure 
for the loss you have gone through 
but then I see your eyes 
all teary and white 
and I’m trying not to cry 

because were in the rain worrying about this life 
we are in some much pain 
listening to hI fi 
and trying not to look at the lives we’ve crossed 
and sitting in this pile 
of magazines we’ve tossed 
so looking back an how we’ve done 
I would say that were doing pretty well 

and here comes this guy 
who treats you all right 
and you go with him 
leaving me to 
and I say 
hey hey 
wait a minute 
and you say 
so so 
I’ll be back before you know it 

and you leave me in the rain 
trying to sort out my life 
and seeing what became 
of my girlfriend the lime light 
so try to understand where things just fall apart 
and say to yourself... 

where do we start again 
are friends tIll then 
do we have what takes 
are we good together 
or just another feather 
floating away 

and I tell you now 
whether it was meant to be 
and I tell you now 
because I haven’t seen you since fourteen… 

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Date created: April 29, 2009
Date published: April 29, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: caste, demeonte, emo, lyrics, poems, pop, rap, songs, soul, techno, wizard
Word Count: 375
Times Read: 395
Story Length: 17
Children Rank: 2.9/5.0 (5 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (58 votes)