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"Infinite Web, The charcoaled remains of the promised souls" -> (2 skipped) -> "slims path: stable homes" -> "the completion of the upper villa"

The death of Grip, and the seperation of Carrey and Slim  by demeonte

The ground lurched beneath them once.

Slim ran to gather up Grip and Carrey as the ground began to slowly fall out from beneath them. 'What did she do!? I just wanted to make stable housing!' Slim said as Carrey cradled Grip and the two became one.  "Names Gary!" 'NOW  IS NOT THE TIME FOR THAT!' Slim shouted in anger and sudden fright as the ground fell away from them.  Gary went back to being Grip and Carrey again as the three fell away from each other.

 Slim wasn't built for flying, but apparently his legs were long enough at act as propellers and slowly begian to spin on him. 'This isn't a good thing at all.' he though to himself as Grip fell to the west of him and Carrey almost to the east if he had not thought to grab a hold of her at the last minute. "THANK YOU! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD THANK YOU!". Grip was too far away for anyone to help him, his ability to float wasn't of any help to him as he simply flailed around as the wind flipped him this way and that.

Slim and Carrey looked in horror as grip tried to right himself, only to be struck by a large peice of slate that had cracked off the tip of their once proud home. It was almost too much for the two to digest as Grips lifeless body shrank faster and faster still with the weight of the mountain tip. Slim could see the look of terror in his now cold, dead eyes. 'This... This is too much... Hopefully we survive this tragic incident.' Carrey looked at slim with a renewed sense of hope. Her large and muscular legs wraping around his body as they two continued to fall.

They had been falling through the sunny orange sky for what seemed like hours to Slim, he looked down to see that Carrey had fallen asleep. Her eye turning a pale blue color as she inhaled, then turning green to red when she exhaled. He looked around at the blue clouds that occasionaly passed them by and noticed that at the edges of each cloud, they were lines of black and silver. Almost as if they were alive and full of people. He suddenly shook that thought from his head as he saw two of the blue clouds collide and explode with tremendous force. The resulting shockwaves were enough to the point where it seperated a panicking Slim, and a sleeping Carrey, and sent them rocketing in two different directions.

'CARREY!'

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Date created: June 11, 2009
Date published: June 11, 2009
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Word Count: 470
Times Read: 240
Story Length: 1