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"Infinite Web, The charcoaled remains of the promised souls" -> "The Stogh: Year One" -> "stable housing or lower ground?" -> "slims path: stable homes"

the completion of the upper villa  by demeonte
slim had been working with grip and carrey all week to complete the improvements on the stability of the houses and had stopped to take a break while his body regenerated his stock of ammunition. 'yes i do beleive that making tunnels is not the way squigs or ceros would have wanted us to do. but, it mightve been easier had squigs done it in the first place, i wonder how hes doing?' slim thought to grip and carrey as the two of them worked together while grip was trying to hammer a nail into solid stone. "grip-" "yes?" "could you please-" "float for a little while while you rest?" "yes, exactly what i was about to-" "say?" "sometimes i really hate-" "the fact that were tow halves of the same soul? yeah, me too." carrey said nothing while the load on her back lightened considerably. "thank-" "you. yes i know, lets just get the job done-" "as well as we can." she sighed as she sat down next to slim, who, because of his long and dangly four legs had no other choice but to crouch.
 
 'was it just me, or did i hear a giant explosion to the east of our current location?' slim said aloud as he looked up to see the vast oceans and hundreds of broken contenents, each in there own way special, each in there own way full of unknown dangers. carrey looked up as well, noting that there were three to six different castles at various points on one contenent, while a giant lake that was pink and blue with bubbles erupting every once in a while. "it mightve just been your imagination. i think aside from you, ceros, squigs, me and grip over there. were alone on this place. where ever here is." she sighed inwardly. 
 
 'i dont think that were alone in this place, tis just that there might be so few of us actually living in this magnificent planet, that we have yet to actually meet anyone else here. but dont lose hope, as soon as we get everything straightened out, then i think every one will eventualy start to appear.' the creature sighed loudly, looking around at all the work they had done, and wondered how his friends were doing.
 
suddenly, with out warning, a rockslide came crashing down onto the area and slim had just seconds to get grip and carrey to saftey before anything happened to them. there were big rocks and boulders, and little pebbles that bounced onto the glass like ground, causing chips and cracks where ever they hit. slim didnt even notice that all the rocks and pebbles were coming from the sky and he didnt even notice that those rocks that had fallen over the edges of the cliff simply floated after falling underneath the top of the bottom most mountain. 'crap, i wonder how ceros is doing with that sky flarn.' he said to no one in particular, looking back to see all the hard work that the three had done for the week had been ruined. 
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Date created: May 29, 2009
Date published: May 30, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: adventure, arm, arms, average, bug, bust, carrey, cero, charcoaled, eye, eyes, five, four, grip, infinite, insectiod, legs, light, lightning, nose, of, one, project, projects, promised, proposal, propose, remains, rock, rocky, slim, snake, souls, squigs, stogh, tengu, the, turret, two, web, wings
Word Count: 621
Times Read: 211
Story Length: 2
Children Rank: 2.9/5.0 (1 votes)