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"Infinite Web, The charcoaled remains of the promised souls" -> (3 skipped) -> "rick and ester stay behind, part 1" -> "chucks path: straight down forever part 1"

chucks path: straight down forever part 2  by delmer

for the strangest reason, chuck couldnt shake the feeling that the thing that made this seemingly endless hole, was the woman talking him to death. he interuptted her chat a thon long enough to ask her a direct enough question. "are you responsible for this endless thing im falling down?" the question seemed to hit a raw nerve on the woman, because she instantly exploded into a visiosectiod much much larger then the ones he had encountered with rick and ester. "YOU WILL DIE LIVING WATER BALOON!" it screamed in rage and rath. "great all i did was ask it a question and look what happens. oh well, i guess there is no really interesting way to avoid this fight." chuck said calmly.

 the creature the woman had turned into was like a giant pincushion with long, large, vieney tendrels that were tipped with four hundred drills that were covered in a highly toxic layer of acid. "WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH THESE GUYS AND ACID! I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO KNOW!?" chuck screamed in  frustration. he couldnt get distracted. one wrong move and it was curtains for him. "BEFORE YOU DIE, PUNY BIENG, IS THERE ANYTHING YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW!?"  the huge thing asked him in tones dripping with savage rage and tormenting force. "yeah... does water kill you?" the creature raged even more as it slammed its tenrdils deep into the wall.

"guess ill just have to find out for myself then! WATER TORNADO!" he openedhis mouth wide and a highly pressurized stream of water came out with excessive force.

the stream hit the creature dead on and the result surprised both chuck and his former companion.

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Date created: May 28, 2009
Date published: May 28, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: aiuchi, bad-company, ballbusting, center, charcoaled, chuck, cm, donut, down, ester, gazette, infinite, insect, kakurenbo, kinggainer, laruku, ng, of, oid, olivia, op, oxe, oxegen, project, projects, promised, proposal, propose, reggie, rei0109, remains, rick, rika, sect, souls, the, trelant, trelent, up, vio, vision, web
Word Count: 339
Times Read: 198
Story Length: 1