Discussion of "The Alley Chapter 2" by darabre
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Jenny7777 2 months, 1 week ago
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Is this porn or a rape story? Not having seen the previous chapter, I'm a little confused. :) |
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dogdeity11 2 months, 1 week ago
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Damn. Whew. |
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writerwannabe 2 months ago
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Wow. I'm almost afraid to ask...nope, I won't. Your writing is so real as to be almost certainly based on reality. Doesn't necessarily have to be, I know. I can describe to a "T" what it feels like to be gut shot, although I've never been. What I'm saying is that this is so graphically written that even I could feel the violence, the cold blade and, at least understand, the orgasm. Fantastic job!! (And I didn't use "v..." once!) LOL |
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