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Discussion of "The Alley Chapter 2" by darabre


1 Jenny7777 2 months, 1 week ago Reply

Is this porn or a rape story? Not having seen the previous chapter, I'm a little confused. :)


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1 dogdeity11 2 months, 1 week ago Reply

Damn. Whew.
This was something. Like the first chapter, terrific descriptions. I felt like a voyeur fly on the brick wall. And the end was certainly a jolt. Not sure I really want to read more. But if you write it, I will.
Suggestion: At the bottom of each chapter there is a box that indicates, ‘Write next chapter.’ Chapter twos should be continued on chapter ones.


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1 writerwannabe 2 months ago Reply

Wow. I'm almost afraid to ask...nope, I won't. Your writing is so real as to be almost certainly based on reality. Doesn't necessarily have to be, I know. I can describe to a "T" what it feels like to be gut shot, although I've never been. What I'm saying is that this is so graphically written that even I could feel the violence, the cold blade and, at least understand, the orgasm. Fantastic job!! (And I didn't use "v..." once!) LOL


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