darabre
Last Login: Nov. 14, 2008
19 Comments by darabre
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darabre 1 month ago
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I liked it, but i was also disturbed by her inviting kids to her house by themselves. Even if her motives are pure, but maybe that's why she's gonna die. hmm interesting. |
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darabre 1 month, 1 week ago
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Hebe, it actually is a prologue to a story I am in the middle of writing. I promise there is a lot more. Thanks for reading!! |
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darabre 1 month, 1 week ago
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I liked it. It was well written, your writing has an urgency that just sort of propells you to the next line. Cool. |
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darabre 1 month, 1 week ago
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This was really great!! A little disturbing in some parts (turning the shirt inside out made me gag). I always enjoy really good writing because I see it like a movie in my head instead of words on a page, this made a very vivid movie. I give it a 5 |
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darabre 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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There are no bells in college, at least not at any of the colleges I have attended. Other than a few spelling and grammatical errors, not bad. so is something up with her partner Alba? I thought maybe her prof. was looking strangly because he knew something. |
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darabre 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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I liked this a lot. It was very descriptive and I can just see that mom staring into that hamper. Can't wait to read more. |
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darabre 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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I was wondering if english was not your first language? The way this is written reminds me of a russian guy I used to know, his english sounded pretty much the same. |
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darabre 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Loved it!! it is so funny, I would love to read more. |
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darabre 2 months, 1 week ago
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interested to see what it is she's hunting |
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darabre 2 months, 1 week ago
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Thought it was really great!! I would love to read more. |
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7 Chapters by darabre
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3.1/5.0 - published Oct 26, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
a boy is attacked while sitting by the river
Tags: suspense |
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3.5/5.0 - published Oct 26, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
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small segment of a fantasy story
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3.6/5.0 - published Sep 24, 2008 - 3 comments (preview tags)
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 22, 2008 - 7 comments
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3.2/5.0 - published Sep 02, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
a short comedic play
Tags: comedy |
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4.1/5.0 - published Aug 26, 2008 - 8 comments (preview)
Nina Malone lives alone in a small cottage in the woods, until one day a stranger shows up on her porch, sad and desperate.
Tags: romance, supernatural |


