I liked it, but i was also disturbed by her inviting kids to her house by themselves. Even if her motives are pure, but maybe that's why she's gonna die. hmm interesting.

Hebe, it actually is a prologue to a story I am in the middle of writing. I promise there is a lot more. Thanks for reading!!

I liked it. It was well written, your writing has an urgency that just sort of propells you to the next line. Cool.

This was really great!! A little disturbing in some parts (turning the shirt inside out made me gag). I always enjoy really good writing because I see it like a movie in my head instead of words on a page, this made a very vivid movie. I give it a 5

There are no bells in college, at least not at any of the colleges I have attended. Other than a few spelling and grammatical errors, not bad. so is something up with her partner Alba? I thought maybe her prof. was looking strangly because he knew something.

I liked this a lot. It was very descriptive and I can just see that mom staring into that hamper. Can't wait to read more.

I was wondering if english was not your first language? The way this is written reminds me of a russian guy I used to know, his english sounded pretty much the same.

Loved it!! it is so funny, I would love to read more.

interested to see what it is she's hunting

Thought it was really great!! I would love to read more.