Discussion of "October Chill: South of Denver" by danceronice

Nice chapter. I loved the heels on the pavement and the tension that caused with the main character. Wanting to look, but not wanting to see that it was his wife. Great job!

Good job, danceronice! I especially liked the way you included the "click-clack" of heels and made it through to the end "Trickster. The natives called Coyoute."