Discussion of "The Unknown: Electric Boogaloo" by dalton

Awesome. The best story I have read on here!!

that was sarcasm by the way b4 anyone worries about me

That's an insulting use of computer memory.

Too short. Not in context. Poor plot line. Lousy joke. My vote: .5

There were a few grammatical errors in there so you should really proofread. It did remind quite a bit of the Brothers Karamazov in its way of touching the human soul and questioning everything we believe. The piece's obvious lack in length leaves a profound effect on the reader. Woohoo! I'm a smartass too!

What cracks me up is that this piece is still in the contest standings. Wendyboop, Aggeloi, and I are getting raped by whiny-titty-babies and this piece actually has a score higher than a 1, haha. Hmmmm, the smell of justice...it's like armor-all in a porsche on a hot day.

Oh yeah, she should have shot the kid and then made a pie out of him. And it's never told how old Ms. B is any of the stories (just came to me). If she's been floating through 16+ towns and has already been married with a kid, I don't know how successful a middle aged biddy going through menopause will be at street walking.

"...shot the kid and make pie out him." That is the best thing I have read all day.

I score your comment a 4.0

Interesting how a comment can be longer than the submission. ;)

LOL, Zatoichi! I originally didn't bother voting or commenting, but I see it might be necessary. It's silly, yes, but not worth the time spent looking at it.

Rofl

For some reason, this chapter made me laugh.

Your name is Cheeseliker, hahahahaha. That's awesome! Damn, I need some sleep. I've posted nothing useful today at all, haha.