Discussion of "'Pay Day in Detroit'" by crystalfoo

C-Foo…this is magical. Wow, you really handled this chapter excellently. I’ve been kicking around ideas for like a week now…and this is picture perfect. I love that you made Angelique all crazy!
And the setting fire…AWESOME! I’m guessing no one else here is from Detroit…so you probably aren’t familiar with the Broderick Tower. (yea, it is a real building. If you’re a sports fan than you maybe have seen it while watching a Tigers game. Beyond the right field wall of Comerica Park there is a skyscraper that always has a huge banner hanging from it. That is the Broderick Tower)
And it would be a pretty amazing sight to see it in flames.
After reading the new MASHs yesterday I was all juiced up and I started writing this chapter last night. Then got too much wine in me and it started getting really outrageous. Still pretty much is, but I finished it up this morning. By the time I went to publish it I found yours already there. And believe me when I say, Yours is a lot better than mine! I love it.
Even so, I am still going to drop my chapter in…just so I don’t feel like I wasted my time. I still want to share my demented vision with others ya know….however I am not going to publish it. I would prefer to move forward from your storyline because we have such good continuity going here…and a tremendous group of MASHers!
oh yea…gave ya a 5!!

Spectacular! I am a total pyro so believe me when I say I'm ITCHING with exitement right now! Flaming, scorching, smoking F I V E!!

Ha! I seriously love yall. You are both so fun to mash with! I've been wanting to mash all week but you know...reality and business blah blah blah...lol. Thanks for the tremendous compliments...and I'm dying to see where this is going. someone has to pick up good 'ole Toby and move him along in this. I still feel like he's the good 'bad' guy. :)

Foo, I hear you about reality and business and life getting in the way. I just got around to reading this and Nash's previous. As I commented on his, I'm having a helluva time finding some glorious, raving words to use with you guys...lol.
Suffice...another excellent, excellent piece of writing. And as honeygloom wrote...a flaming, scorching, smoking F I V E!

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