Spot on...I kind of thought splitting the chapters into two parts when the character limit was exceeded would make it somewhat confusing. But if it's ordained by BBN then I say go for it.

I discovered that I have an easier time writing comedic action in the present tense. This was not obvious to me until I attempted this in past tense. Like pulling teeth. So now I know, which will be helpful. lol

Chapter 2 of TTEFTR is posted. I'm wiped. Character limit issues....each time I cut, cut, cut, it ADDED characters to the over-all count. SM interface sucks at math too. =)

Hack, hack, hack, chop, chop, chop. I hate that character limit.
Please ignore ugly formatting and use the ******* as page breaks/scene breaks. I had to chop down every space I could to make the limit.

I want you to know that photosynthesis had me pulling at my hair. Thank you Becker. I owe you one. =)

Ok, next?

Your variable is......Snorkel.

Ok, I'm on it. I need Honey's variable.

So far I've got : Photosynthesis, dolphins, guns, salsa.

I'm going to need to think for a little bit...lol.

ah, yes. Thanks for that. The math problem AND Photosynthesis.

Halfway down part one, the rusty bells start dinging. Hey, I know these people. Hmmm. Jim, Crystal, Cindy, Missy, Ben and Charlie. You so clever Becker. =) At least I got a boyfriend out of the deal. Right, Ben?

I love it, btw. Classic Nash. 5 vote.

Photosynthesis? Really?

Honey, you wear whatever you want. As long as you are in the mash. :)

Besides I know my personal combo loco is jammies and wine.

Bean, honey, katrina, synapto...wow. hi all. It's so good to see everyone here again!
@bean....maybe that should be the title. :)

It just gets better and better. Hello again, Agg. Good to see you!

Fantastic chapter, but from you, I expect little else. Dialogue was realistic and swift. Plot moves along. Questions asked but left open for the next masher. True to form, it's a def 5 star.

Hallelujah. Let me pour a glass of wine with my Cheese.

Most excellent.

Good to see you again, and I second the welcome back. =)

Let me creep my ancient **** in this one....

=) I'll take #2.

variable is.... Winnebago.

Btw, Hi cheese and wolf. Long time no see, guys. =)