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crookedt

Real Name: Theresa Matzke
Date Joined: Jan. 11, 2008
Last Login: Jan. 4, 2009

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1 crookedt 4 years, 4 months ago Context

oops...Judeo


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3 crookedt 5 years, 4 months ago Context

Those last two paragraphs of reflection are incredible. I love the analogy of smoke. I love the question about the defining moment in our lives and how when in that moment, we don't always see it, but years later, we can. And it can still be surprising because we still can see that moment from the perspective we had and feel the same surprise we would have if in that moment, someone told us that this moment would be that ever defining fork that would change our life forever. Gah.....I can't wait to see where this goes. :)


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2 crookedt 5 years, 4 months ago Context

This story is so beautiful and it mirrors in one way the Judo/Christian creation story with its analysis of free will and the negative consequences that can bring to this world. But the forbidden romance between the moon and the sun echos so many romances of today....the romances that should but cannot be. I love this story. It is poetic, heartfelt, and intelligent.


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