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creativesoul

Date Joined: May 16, 2010
Last Login: July 12, 2012

17 Comments by creativesoul

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1 creativesoul 4 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks WWB , I had fun writing it. Just trying out some new styles. :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 4 months ago Context

Nice one WWB, love the twist of bringing Julie back. Should intensify the revenge aspect of the story. Good stuff!


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 4 months ago Context

That was good Karonher, welcome to the VampMash! Haha.. I liked what you did with the characters. Good work.


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 4 months ago Context

Wow, didn't see that coming. Nice little diversive twist at the end. Looking forward to seeing what comes next. Maybe the baby can grow up, and knock that f*&&^% off in his sleep ! :P
Well done again :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 4 months ago Context

Wow, that was fascinating WWB. Really nice composition there. I read start to finish without blinking. The descriptiveness grabbed me immediately. The last 2 paragraphs I think I had to read twice to make sure, I'd read what I had! Nice one.


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 5 months ago Context

Chapter 3 is on the way, you've got me thinking now, watch this space :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 5 months ago Context

Very nice writerwannabe. I like that backstory, its dynamic. Seems a perfect setting, for a tale of many vampire slayings a-foot. Buffy eat ya heart out. Nicely written, that scenario provides great motive for ultimate retribution.

May have to start thinking about Chapter 3 :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 5 months ago Context

Hey writerwannabe, wow, so much to learn, but this is fantastic. Firstly, yes I read your comments, and thank you, I appreciate ALL comments and feedback. Secondly, can you tell me more about this 'Google Docs'? How do I find it / use it ? Thanks again in advance :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 5 months ago Context

Thanks so much writewannabe, I have had this idea in my head now for awhile. Initially, I had dreamt up to much back story, it was slow starting. I decided maybe jumping straight in was the way to go. I like the idea of the 'twist', going against the vampires. I'd love to see what others might come up with too.... :)


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1 creativesoul 4 years, 5 months ago Context

Thanks writerwannabe, I'll do that. I really don't know what went wrong!!! ? !!! :(


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