I've reviewed and understand what's going on :)
I'll email ya if I come up with any questions.

cjbishop08@gmail.com

I'm up for it if nobody minds. :)

Thanks again, Al. And you hit the nail right on the top :)

Thanks, Al. Yeah, I always get those two mixed up. Nah, I'm no rider. I'm actually wary around horses, they tend to chase me and try to kick me for some weird reason. Lol.

And the Heretics are the General and his army. Lacked a bit on description and clarification on the story.

Forgive any lack of depth, this is more of an attempt to get back to actual story telling.

I really enjoyed this. Was able to relate a lot to this story. Great job, Jones.

"Below was the great dance of a million wired souls canopied under a Sun God, misguided dreamers who had congregated from all over the world." -I loved this line, so true. :)

Not usually a fan of the whole prom scene kind of thing, but this was great! Been reading over several of your submissions and you're a great writer.

Can't wait to find out what happens next :)

Aye, but no way to get into it. Deleted all my other pieces (on backup, of course), but not ones that are mashed. Tis would be the consequences for my actions, lol.

Great story, SS. I'm very intrigued on if it is real or just imagination. Hope you continue it :)

Thanks, Al. Eh, I wasn't in my right mind and requested my old one to be deleted.