Discussion of "Gnashing of Teeth" by cjbishop

Experimenting and trying to 'capture' the nonhuman perspective of other beings.. Dunno if I was a little successful or not.

Like to add that JD_Renaissance's 'Fallen Angels' story was what inspired me to write this :)

I think you were a lot successful, cj. Through your words I was clearly able to visualize the remnants and how they operate. I especially liked the reference to children being able to see them before their parents "taught" them not to.
Everyone "feels" strangely at times...paranoid, scared or simply that "something" is in the room with them. You played on that very well. Another occurence that I've often had...and I imagine many others...is a movement, a flicker of something,caught from the corner of the eye that vanishes when you turn your attention to it; a glimpse into another world, perhaps?

Yeah, what WW said. At my house Remnants hide the remote, leave lights on, and steal the cheese off the mouse traps without setting them off.

Thanks guys and al, you think that's bad? They possess my little girl to turn off my xbox while during an important part of a game! lol that and they like to make this little singing dog toy turn on right as I drift off to sleep... o0" Haunting words in a innocent feminine voice: 'I see you!'

Great writing and a good story idea.

What a story. It is a good read. Very powerful and entertaining.