Straight to the point, but describes a whole topic in such few words. I loved it. Nice, al

Thank you, wwb. I've really come to love this site and the people within it. A lot of great talent here and inspiration.

This being my first mash, I definitely understand what you're saying and agree with it wholeheartedly. I do so look forward to contributing to great stories in the near future. :) Thank you for all your compliments and inspiring me to mash

This is very exciting, I thoroughly enjoyed mashing off of your's and wwb's creative writing. I'm glad and honored that you both liked this. Thank you both for your compliments and inspiration for me to start mashing more.

I do so hope this continues onward :) I'd love to do another chapter after someone else unless it concludes there. Great experience, and as wwb had said it's challenging and great way to better yourself. Very glad to be apart of this :) Thanks for letting me

So very true. Nice work, al. I loved this. Short and sweet. You explain so many things in so few of words. And that's a hard thing for me to do.

And welcome to SM :)

I enjoyed this and how you did great making us see through the tiger's eyes. Even with the descriptions, making things that we know all too well alien and foreign. Great job. Good pace as well. Interested in seeing what exactly those curious upright creatures are up too. :)

Thank you, Kiss.

I agree with what you have critiqued. Also noticed, when rereading it, that Crusader threw Eddie into the wall of an apartment building, then later the area was described as the warehouse district. Lol. Oops.

Posted chapter 3 to 'Notes from a Shifter'. :)

Thanks very much, wwb!

I was hoping to unfold it a tad more as it progresses with the characters. Glad you liked it :)

Especially being my first mash here, may have to try it more often. Challenging.

All right, I did chapter 3 but left it as a draft to see what y'all think. Went with a bit slower pace. Tell me what you think.

Still trying to get fully over this block of actual storytelling. Hope I didn't butcher it :)