Discussion of "the great escape" by chloe
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hebe6405 3 years, 4 months ago
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Wow - good start! The thoughts were portrayed well, the narrative echoed my suspicions, and yet nothing has been spelled out... I'll have to do a careful read through and add to this one. |
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chloe 3 years, 3 months ago
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Hi Hebe6405 - sorry - just realized now that you commented on this- I really hope you mash it- You have a great way with this kind of story- don't know where I was going- just wondered what it would be like to escape for a bitand tried to leave a lot of room for interpretation! Thanks for reading! |
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