Discussion of "Harvest 3 the flock" by chloe

Quite nice, Chloe. I very much enjoy your style. Didn't know where mine was going - wanted to leave it open - but I think your continuation is seamless, logical, and captivating. Great mix of small details to flesh out dimension and tension. My socks appear to have been crowed away.

Thanks Nashville,
You're a tough act to follow...as I know from TSNK contest (lol)... I liked how you developed Maybel without making her a stereotype...what an unlikely protaganist! also liked the unexpected role of the dog as beloved pet...potential there a la pet cemetary. I've never embraced mainstream slasher horror but liked reading quirky dark character-driven scary stuff.Thought i'd take a stab at it. Didn't know I had that effect on socks. Thanks!
Chloe

p.s. I also mashed your le blog de uselessness if you want to check it out. it's amazing how much writing you get done when your home sick with a head cold.

Nice work Chloe! You wrote Maybel very well, she has a great voice:) Good flow and pacing too, all around smashing job!