Discussion of "Renaissance Man (revised)" by chloe

Hi guys,
I published this a while back and after reading the comments left, I tried to revise it a bit for HAC- still can't get a handle on horror- does a little creepy qualify? haha- Thanks for taking the time to read and give feedback.
Chloe

It's decent, but never very scary, just kind of mysterious. An interesting story, to say the least. I have added on to the bank robbers storyline, and was hoping you'd check it out. I don't like advertising my work like this but theres no other way to really let you personally know and I thought you would like to know so if you want to, go check it out.