Discussion of "Midas Uncovered" by chloe

Holy smokes and luvaduck! You drew me in totally. I really liked that you, ahem, tied it to a certain real-virtual site we all know and love. But you know, I forgot I was reading something on storymash so quickly, it wasn't as effective as it might otherwise have seemed. Sorry, can't critique, too involved. Chapter 2, please. NOW!

Thanks Silver- reworking things now-anything I can do before I hit publish?

You know, it flowed so smoothly and fascinated me so much that all I can say is, nothing threw me off stride.

Ha, this was great. Love the connection to SM, and a real interesting story you got here. Looking forward to more.

Thanks so much! Fancy a go at it?

Came along this one going through the forum. This is pretty interesting. Thought the anagramed names was an interesting touch, though I found it a little odd that the character didn't pick up on it, despite the other similarities. Definitely wouldn't mind a sequel chapter.