chloe |
Date Joined: June 24, 2008
Last Login: May 27, 2009 |
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341 Comments by chloe
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chloe 1 year, 6 months ago
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Beautifully written! - strange how the human psyche is always somewhat drawn to the familiar from our earliest years- good or bad- I think it works as a compelling opening chapter but could stand as it is as a completed piece. |
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chloe 1 year, 6 months ago
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Of course! what was i thinking! hahah |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Hahaha- but whatever would they do without their $1400 waste baskets? |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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How about a unique version of a fairy tale either modern day or alternative ending/ viewpoint? or has that been done too much? |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Did you ever read those childhood books- one called "Ben and me" was a bio of ben Franklin through the eyes of a mouse that lived in his house- i think there was a Paul revere bio by his horse? clever with lots of kid appeal |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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oooh can I have one, please please! I need a little inspiration. |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Oooh this opens a wealth of possibilities!- beautifully written with great visuals- painted a vivid picture! |
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chloe 1 year, 7 months ago
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A standing ovation! What a riot- loved the descriptions of Red as "technicolor savior" the nudie cushions, the defunct fog machine! The theater verite' improv for the script (I think I took that same film class!) was classic- I loved the way you had Steve thinking on his feet and gradually winning over the actors and leaving a hanger at the end! Sorry this is late I haven't logged in in a while (2009 is not off to a very good start unfortunately) but can't wait to see where this leads! |
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chloe 1 year, 9 months ago
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Many Thanks guys- You're right about Jake on the bus being a little iffy- love the idea about him being pulled from the stairwell instead- that would have worked better! Glad you got the "ghost" town idea (lol)not many people mentioned picking up on that. Chapter one and two were such fun I thought I'd have a go! |
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chloe 1 year, 9 months ago
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Many Thanks for your feedback and vote Huntsfamouswolf! (at the risk of appearing an idiot-what's broughsy? -lol) |
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25 Chapters by chloe
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 22, 2008 - 21 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.7/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2008 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Sep 28, 2008 - 2 comments
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2008 - 3 comments
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 13, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Sep 09, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Sep 08, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 08, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 07, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 07, 2008 - 13 comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published Aug 11, 2008 - 5 comments
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4.3/5.0 - published Aug 02, 2008 - 11 comments
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4.2/5.0 - published Jul 27, 2008 - 15 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 23, 2008 - 6 comments
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Jul 15, 2008 - no comments
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4.1/5.0 - published Jul 13, 2008 - 47 comments - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 07, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.4/5.0 - published Jul 05, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2008 - 15 comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Jun 30, 2008 - no comments (preview)
chick lit- country girl goes to the big city
Tags: draft |
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3.5/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
mystery suspense a suspicious character appears to be on the run from something...
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