Oh No - just found my way back here and the patron saint of this place is gone :(

Hi,
Hadn't been on storymash a while but so glad you both liked it- would love to have someone work on the next chapter and I'll jump back in!

Yes I'd like to see where you take this as well

I'm intrigued- nice imagery - the heat like a buzzing fly-a rock on a wire - and the style of the prose gives it an otherworldly mystical quality-

hmm that's a hard one- maybe after Shakespeare's time as commoners couldn't write- unless it involves the aristocracy which could be intriguing etc- early 1900's could be cool - or even victorian

Hi Mashers-
Been away from storymash a little while- (ok my last visit was 2008)- but after much confusion over lost passwords and changed emails thought I'd revisit it - just wondering what's new and might give my pastime as an amateur scribe another go-reread Red Brockton- what fun!
Chloe

cool idea- any thoughts on setting or time period?

Beautifully written! - strange how the human psyche is always somewhat drawn to the familiar from our earliest years- good or bad- I think it works as a compelling opening chapter but could stand as it is as a completed piece.

Of course! what was i thinking! hahah

Hahaha- but whatever would they do without their $1400 waste baskets?