Discussion of "Noctis" by chavon13

Engaging from the start. The sci-fi elements aren't forced, and the made up elements fit just right. Plenty of intrigue to build upon - the light, the mission, the Nox. Looking forward to the next installment.

Left me wishing for a little more description. Not much, but it seemed to me there were opportunities presented to fit in minor details, and were passed. But I prefer my descriptions in small doses, fitted across the pages, so that is probably a personal preference.