Discussion of "gardening" by cartoonfruit

Will I guess you can but fence around your garden. and this story would be better written on Triond.

I guess you like rabbits.

thanks for the advice

Nothing wrong with the writing as such - it flows evenly and is reasonably easy to read. However this piece lacks urgency. The problem itself appears to be trivial, at least in a universal sense, and fails to evoke much thought or emotion in the reader. Two stars.