I liked it. Didn't see that little plot twist with Max being a witch so was very satisfying. Make sure you proof read stuff for grammatical errors though. It stinks, I have to force myself to do it because its no fun but you catch weird plurals that aren't supposed to be there quickly enough.

Thanks! I'm glad to see someone is enjoying my work.

Thanks terelyn. Good to know someone is enjoying something I wrote. I may not write the second chapter on story mash though. Not sure if this is the resource I need. Many things we write here are never read and I'm not sure how much this site helps us develop our skills.

I like it. The style is something like my own so how could I not. Hope you'll get inspired to keep the train of thought going. Seems like a cool beginning.

Thanks ridulosaur. I'm glad you liked it. It wasn't planned it was just kind of there saying "Write me now!!!"

Very unique idea about the dawning of an ice age and how we would react to it. The sad reality is that if it happened it would probably be similar to your account.

Thanks Shafi, somehow I got inspired to write one. I'm no poet but a walk outside and something was just screaming inside me to do it.

Thanks honeygloom!! Love the feedback, makes me want to write another.

That was great! It never occured to me to play pranks on the tree elf. Sometimes all you need is a push in the right direction to get a story on track.

Thanks guys, I appreciate the read. I was going for kind of a mock kids story with a bit of a reality check thrown in at times. Don't know where the tree elves came from, I must slowly be going insane.