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Discussion of "The Bad Boyfriend" by brittanyleigh


1 brittanyleigh 3 years ago Reply

i know it needs work but its my first one


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1 BrookeWoods 3 years ago Reply

Its good,but it seems like every-other story about the girl and the guy who get pregnant and the guy to bail. It would be an interesting twist if he came back or something happened.(:


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