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bristin
Date Joined: May 22, 2009
Last Login: June 27, 2012

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1 bristin 3 years, 10 months ago Context

Thank you so much, hopefully I can come up with some other peices that you and others like :)

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1 bristin 4 years ago Context

Sorry everyone I know I had a couple mistakes in there X] I was in a bit of a hurry to get these on, I'll be more careful next time.

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1 bristin 4 years ago Context

Thanks a bunch, glad you enjoyed it! :))

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23 Chapters by bristin

"Just Another Odd Feeling" by bristin
2.1/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2010 - no comments (preview)
Does anyone feel the same I wanna know if anyone feels this way I’m looking and this is just feeling odd I wanna see if anyone comes my way
Tags: lost, lyric, music, renewed, senseful, song, thoutghful
"A Lover's Fable" by bristin
2.0/5.0 - published Jun 05, 2010 - no comments (preview)
I stare to the heavens for I know he watches me As the butterflys flee And fill the sky with luminous colors I know that they, whom understand me Are taking my prayers and message to thee
Tags: angel, dream, fantasy, heartfelt, hope, love, meaningful, mystical, poetic, sad
"A Riot Of Broken Dreams" by bristin
2.0/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2010 - no comments (preview)
The overwhelming of droning shells Storming of fragments and ground throwing Nothing blanketing but a blood-red sky And those of the dying moaning
Tags: bloody, death, depressing, meaning, poetic, sad, war
"Hour By Hour (3rd Version)" by bristin
3.1/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2010 - no comments (preview)
Why run. Embrace everything you are Take a trip. Pack your things and take a drive Spread the word of the new age It’s time to make a change and turn the page
Tags: art, depressed, ect, heartfelt, love, lyrics, music, poetry, sad, song
"Hour By Hour (Renewed Version)" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jan 02, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Before I lose my self control Just stay here with me I scream out in cries I can't help myself I want us to be, just you and just me Don't leave me don't go, please No no no no
Tags: art, depressed, ect, heartfelt, love, lyrics, music, poetry, sad, song
"A Figment Of Your Imagination" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Dec 12, 2009 - no comments (preview)
To be viewed in a situation of hope and mind A place where the mysterious and light collide Representing a nature all its own
Tags: beautiful, ect, hope, mysterious, mythical, poetic, unknown
"An Absent Kingdom" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Dec 12, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Disappeared, invisible through the mist An absent dimension calling out Where anything exists…our imagination
Tags: dreams, hope, imagery, imagination, love, magic
"Teenage Innocence (One Love)" by bristin
2.0/5.0 - published Dec 12, 2009 - no comments (preview)
What do you do when you let your heart win You feel as if you’re in a constant spin Heart thumping in anticipation Like a TV star, a whole awaiting nation
Tags: love, love-story, lyric, music, nervous, song, unknowning
"Little Lady" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Your big blue eyes stare with cries. A lost soul you are, Gone and died.
Tags: alone, ect, lost, lyric, music, poem, sad, song
"End Of Dawn" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Deep down you know there's a fighter, Someone higher and what you desire. Not the front face, the one who conspires and is a liar.
Tags: confusion, death, ect, horror, lyric, music, pain, poem, sadness, song
"The Accused" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Sep 19, 2009 - no comments (preview)
They are the accused. Claiming it's false accusations. As their own soul whimpers with fright. Their unsympythetic minds tell them their doing right. That is those of the accused.
Tags: gory, horror, lyrics, music, poem, song
"Never Alone" by bristin
2.8/5.0 - published Aug 01, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Do you ever feel alone. Like you've got nothing to live for. Know that your wrong or. Just listen to the lyrics of this song.
Tags: lyrics, music, poem, poetry, song, tune
"Everything Is Gone" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Cheaters can't be forgiven. It's the unsaid law and. I obide by the rules I'm given. You've been found guilty, nothing more. All the fingers point down you dirty path. Right to the very core.
Tags: lyrics, music, poem, poetry, song, tune
"Tragedy Occurring" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Think of the consequences your actions bring. Don't get thrown in the ring with lions as the bell rings (ding, ding). Find yourself before you lose yourself. Remember. Your heart not only beats for you but for others too.
Tags: lyrics, music, poetry, ryhm, song
"Entertainer To The People" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jul 10, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Be an entertainer to the people. Shout the words, shout the words! Rock the world, rock the stage. You'll never be the same. You can't say what you got till you came.
Tags: lyrics, music, poetry, song
"Hour by Hour" by bristin
2.5/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2009 - 4 comments (preview)
Why run. Embrace everything you are. Take a trip. Pack your things and take a drive. Spread the word of the new age. And say c'mon let's live on Sage oh Sage.
Tags: art, love, lyrics, poetry, song
"Wishful Self" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)
But each of us wants something of oursleves to change. We all have that other personality that we want to have or hide. It's your wishful self. Your more, hidden, dominant self.
Tags: ect, human-race, open, opinionated, society, truthful
"Dream Lights" by bristin
1.5/5.0 - published Jul 08, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Now close your eyes and see your world beyond the darkness of your lids and create light with your dreams.
Tags: art, imagery, open, poetry, religious
"? noitcefrep" by bristin
2.5/5.0 - published Jul 07, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Perfection. Some of the readers will judge this poem by how perfect they believe it to be. Wheather they agree with my statements or not. Judging is something unperfect. And yet we all do it. Including myself. Perfection.
Tags: feelings, opinionated, poem, revealing, truth
"My Savior, My light" by bristin
2.0/5.0 - published May 24, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Is he my savior? No, such a thing doesn’t exist, there’s nothing to save because the world…me is in an everlasting darkness. Sitting in the flames of hell, yes that’s exactly right, this world IS hell.
Tags: bloody, death, exciting, gothic, horror, mystery
"Inside The Unconscious" by bristin
2.4/5.0 - published May 24, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
My mind really is a trap, no emergency exits, just a trap. This is the kind of trap that tries to kill you but only creates a slow and painful death; the perfect description of death- slow and painful.
Tags: bloody, death, exciting, gothic, horror, mystery
"A Dream?" by bristin
2.4/5.0 - published May 24, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Foamy-spit began to develop in the corners of my petite mouth as my body swaggered from side to side uncontrollably. As the convulsions began to worsen I kept replaying the same emotionless thought in my mind; this is the end.
Tags: bloody, death, exciting, gothic, horror, mystery
"The Uknown" by bristin
2.4/5.0 - published May 24, 2009 - 3 comments (preview)
I swallowed a loud, hard gulp as my room flooded ice cold. Goosebumps tracked up and down my body. It was like I had been thrown in an ice chest. The back of my neck hairs stood up, seeming frozen. My skin went clammy and my head began to spin.
Tags: bloody, death, exciting, gothic, horror, mystery