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Discussion of "Cholesterol Junkie" by boobiewalker


1 honeygloom 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

I love it! Your characters are real and you have a unique style. Really great writing.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

thanks kid


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1 theblackhand 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Great story, the best I have read from you so far.


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1 writerwannabe 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Great language, great character development. Well,I do have one complaint about the language..if you're going to use the words, ****, ****, bitch, ****, etc. USE em! I imagine you don't so as not to "offend" some of your readers, but there are filters here on SM to handle that and for me (and perhaps a few others, at least..lol) I prefer the impact of the real words versus the distraction of the made up wannabe words. You know? OK..'nough rantin'...I really, really like your stuff and voted you a 5.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Yeah, I was just throwing in symbols to get past the censors. I hadn't yet realized that about the filters. Trust me, no one appreciates the impact of a good cuss word like ole Boobie.


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