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Discussion of "Hard Time" by boobiewalker


1 theblackhand 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

It was a mistake boobiewalker. I did not leave you out of "30 Days" purposely. When I went and read the comments I must have mistakenly overlooked your name. I'm sorry and this was not intentional. Please, accept the chapter after honeygloom as a offer of forgiveness/good faith and I will fix the way everyone follow again. I am sorry for this.


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2 lamexicanita86 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Fiction or no, that's some f***up ****.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

That "**** up ****" you're referring to is SOLID GOLD ART!


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1 lamexicanita86 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Oh, yeah.


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1 Persephonie 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

I'm not saying it's not interesting. I can kinda relate, cuz I went to jail for some **** up **** that happened to me a long time ago, too.
What's hard for me to swallow is the violent guy on guy sex. Any violent sex, actually, having been a victim of molestation and rape. So please forgive me for not being thouroughly enthralled with the context of the story. I give you a 3 for the balls to write it. :)


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

YOU went to jail for some **** up **** that happened to YOU? Something's a little off there. As far as the violent guy on guy sex goes, that's the way it happened in this story. Don't detract from Boobie's score because YOU can't handle stories that involve savage love. Boobie doesn't remember sending you a transcript to read before anybody else.


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2 Persephonie 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Yes, Boobie....I had some **** up **** happen a long time ago....not caused by me....put me in jail for 2 **** weeks until it got cleared up....what's so hard to believe?
One thing to keep in mind when writing is that not everyone will always like your story...whatever the reason. But this fact alone will determine whether or not you make sales, if it were to be published.
I did not detract from your score just because I don't prefere this type of genre. I actually gave you more than what I thought you deserved for having the balls to write it.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Boobie is absolutely not out to please everyone. He loves that his work makes squares cringe. And despite the fact that your point about making sales wasn't clear (are you suggesting pigeonholing helps or hurts them??), ole Boobs ABSOLUTELY doesn't care about sales!!!! Thanks for the lesson and all, but try to restrain yourself in the future. Boobie is an artist!!!!!! His writing has nothing to do with balls. The best part about this is that you personally already know that you don't "get" or like the Boobsters writing, but you cannot keep away, like a moth drawn to a flame. That fact alone is better than any score I could ever be granted. Keep reading. And keep cringing!


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1 honeygloom 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Classic Boobie:) All shock and awe!


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1 dogdeity11 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Dude, your ridiculous creativity is so absurdly beautiful. If you could see me as I read your work you would probably be super pleased. I don’t know what to think half the time. I re-read your sentences and I furrow my brow…and then I laugh…and then I cringe. And sometimes I just shake my head from side to side and say…“Awww ****, that’s just Boobie, being Boobie!”
But at the end of the read inevitably I’m always left wanting more and isn’t that the point?
Another disturbingly delightful chapter sir.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Dogdeity, your words doth please me greatly and I thank you for typing them. I think I'm gonna celebrate with a few glasses of Jack Daniels tonight. Hell, I may even acquire me a female escort!


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1 Chewdog 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

makes u want to stay the **** out of jail


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2 writerwannabe 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Good story chapter. Fairly well written and the "plot" was unique. Nice twist with the rape victim. But...what's this crap - speaking of yourself in third person? Are you a king? A god? Geesh...give it up, please.


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

You're wrong on many levels. The chapter was VERY well written. And Boobie is all of those things you mentioned. What is wrong with speaking in the 3rd person, truly? Does it hurt you in any way? How about you give up this attempt to impose your will on a true artist like Boobs Walker. After all, you're just a wannabe...


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1 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

By the way, Mr. Wannabe, if you read Mr. Boobs comments as much as his chapters (which is highly recommended, as any words committed by the fingers of Mr. Walker are sure to be gems), you would know very well that he is so busy that his secretary often transcribes his comments via dic(k)tation. But we wouldn't expect you to be one who keeps informed...


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0 aptriplett 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

boobiewalker...once In saw this guy with a cart of food at the story and he was retarded and he kept saying I want to but dogfood cause Im hungrey and I luaghed at him and he got mad at me and so i stole his cart and pushed him over and when he got up i sang that song from footloose and challenged him to a danceoff and so we had a danceoff and he won because everyone will always defend the retarded guy and so now im never going to be the same and all i waned to say was that you are my hero and i wish i could write as well as you and how stupid do you have to be to still be reading this but oh what you are boobiewalker and you are kinda of...


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0 boobiewalker 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Finally, someone who appreciates the finer things in life!!!


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1 writerwannabe 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

LMAO..such ****!


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