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Discussion of "Shut up and Drive" by blue-rosa30


1 Doveman 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

Not a bad idea for a mash. You leave things really open for other authors to play with.
This chapter does need some structure. Huge block paragraphs make for difficult reading.


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1 thamagnopen 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

I really liked the story! keep working on it..


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