Discussion of "Mono" by bleedinginside

This is....mindblowing.
I am in awe. Rarely will I admit that. there are some good writers here, but with you I have become an instant fan. Wow. You have taken me to a new plateau.

Please, continue this. You have my attention. So many SM authors try but cannot reach this level. What I have read from you will stay with me for a long time.
Randy Cane is metamorphising into something that I can believe in. This story had me in its grip. I have been looking for an author such as yourself. I understand you. I understand your work.
I look forward to more from you. If you have other stories to post, please do so. Soon.
I am not much for asking people to read my work as I use to, but I have a posting called "Suicide Watch" that deals with a very depressed individual. The character has experienced a sismilar revelation in a different setting and has taken action.
With the powerful way that you write, you really have impressed me.
Welcome here bleedinginside, welcome.

Wow, thsnks for your comment, I really appreciate it. I didn't expect such a good reaction to such a dark story. I need to revise it because the structure and grammer is not the level I would have liked it to be. I have been writing poetry for years, so I have a ton of poems I can put on here, but this is my first attempt and writing a short story. I haven't had a chance to look at your work yet, I will have to take a look.
I think this story came out of years of experence with dealing with delusional and depressed individuals. With my newfound intrest in metaphysical spirtuality, the story was just in my head waiting to come out.
Again, thank you very much for your kind words about my writing. I will be posting more soon.

I read this story after reading "wounds" and I thought this was very good also. At first I'm a little confused as to what is going on but once I caught what was happening it really drew me into the twisted mind of Randy Cane. Living in New York City, I see individuals like this walking around all the time but so rarely when I see them talking to themselves and such do I actually think about what is going on in their heads.