Discussion of "Mono" by bleedinginside
theblackhand 4 years, 7 months ago
Please, continue this. You have my attention. So many SM authors try but cannot reach this level. What I have read from you will stay with me for a long time.
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bleedinginside 4 years, 7 months ago
Wow, thsnks for your comment, I really appreciate it. I didn't expect such a good reaction to such a dark story. I need to revise it because the structure and grammer is not the level I would have liked it to be. I have been writing poetry for years, so I have a ton of poems I can put on here, but this is my first attempt and writing a short story. I haven't had a chance to look at your work yet, I will have to take a look.
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PEPPZ 4 years, 7 months ago
I read this story after reading "wounds" and I thought this was very good also. At first I'm a little confused as to what is going on but once I caught what was happening it really drew me into the twisted mind of Randy Cane. Living in New York City, I see individuals like this walking around all the time but so rarely when I see them talking to themselves and such do I actually think about what is going on in their heads.
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