Discussion of "Poetry Fun" by bigjmn

Your story debut on here rocks
It's relatable, watching the clocks
Though the outcome was shitty
Your technique was quite witty
Now can someone please help find my socks?

Nicely done, big. Nicely done.

HA, awesome!

Best story I've read on here in weeks. Efficiently written, great voice for the piece, and fantastic limericks-- both their use in the story and in their own right. Can't wait to read more by you.

That was hilarious! Well done, especially the last line. Great work!

Fantastic! Welcome to StoryMash big:)

Welcome to SM, bigjmn!

If this isn't a fluke
Nor written by Luke
Your style here is classy
A writer, right sassy
And here you'll hear naught of rebuke.

Loved your first entry and hope to read much more from you! ;o)

That was really good. I can relate to it cause that's pretty much who I was in high school. I remember back in my junior english class they made us read "The Great Gatsby." I hate that effin' book. I would talk **** about it every single day until I eventually started getting kicked out of class... Excellent writing, I look forward to reading more form you.

Heh. Nice. I like the deadpan end, it was a good touch to round off a good story.

Bravo! Most definitely worth reading. Welcome to SM.

Cool! ;-)

I'm with you on this one.

I loved it! Genius! I liked the ending!