Discussion of "An Angel" by bhargav_modi

Artsy stuff can be a difficult start to learning a language.

Good, creative. There were a few things that you need to watch out for though. Words that are actually one word all together, but split them up, easy mistake. ie: sun shine = sunshine, her self = herself. Just small stuff, easy to misunderstand. Keep on writing!

thanx....yeah i will take care of the mistakes which you have suggested me....