Discussion of "Hero Chapter 4" by beachboyslover5314
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sbaggyblurb 5 years, 2 months ago
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Good try. Breaking it into smaller paragraphs would make it a lot more readable. |
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sbaggyblurb 5 years, 2 months ago
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Good try. Breaking it into smaller paragraphs would make it a lot more readable. |
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