Discussion of "Wishing for the Light" by bartsurf95

I like the "good versus evil" message in this poem. It has a great mood and vibe to it. Nice job! Just one or two typos, but otherwise this is very good.

Thanks!i really appreciate that
And yeah I'm sure it has a few probs,it's cause I didn't put that much work into it,I just wrote what came to me at the time.and yeah,the clash between good and evil was what I was tryin to focus on.thanks again!

me after reading: the sunshines in my heart its always there and thats why im a sweet, sweet honey bear!
lol thats my connection to ur poem. it was really good. i could really well relate to it. trying hard to stay good and stay clean but then being tempted by things i know are wrong. really good poem. :)

@ silenceiztheonlyword
Thanks a bunch,that's kind of my fight as well over here,it mentions the struggle important for every one of us to keep ourselves in control and know our limits,and know what is of real value in this life.thanks again