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the river  by baransk

Nothing will ever again

be like the constant rocking

of the tiny tin boat

with the deck slippery like an algae covered boulder.

making ripples in the water

I am calm

distant laughter echoes from the shore as

I dangle my feet off the side

bobbing with the boat

the water cool like mint.

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Date created: June 4, 2011
Date published: June 4, 2011
Comments: 1
Tags: boulder, calm, cool, laughter, memories, mint, ripples, river, water
Word Count: 205
Times Read: 74
Story Length: 1