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Discussion of "Trevor wake up" by azriim


1 justhoff 1 year ago Reply

That's depressing. Good job bringing the reader into the emotion of the scene.


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1 synapto 1 year ago Reply

Very, very abstract. I suppose I should tell you what his problem is.


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1 azriim 1 year ago Reply

Thank you. Yes, please do.


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1 synapto 1 year ago Reply

Shucks, I walked right into that one. Let me think about it.


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1 azriim 1 year ago Reply

Please do, I wonder what your analysis is. :)


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