Discussion of "Trevor wake up" by azriim
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justhoff 1 year ago
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That's depressing. Good job bringing the reader into the emotion of the scene. |
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synapto 1 year ago
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Very, very abstract. I suppose I should tell you what his problem is. |
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azriim 1 year ago
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Thank you. Yes, please do. |
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synapto 1 year ago
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Shucks, I walked right into that one. Let me think about it. |
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azriim 1 year ago
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Please do, I wonder what your analysis is. :) |
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