Discussion of "Anticipation" by ashi8848

Fun little start of something. Fits the title well. Nice how I wondered what was going on until you mention the toast, but even then left wondering about the nature of "the experiment".

Thank you very much for commenting on my story. It's nice to know the objective of this story was achieved. Again, thanks :D

Very cool premise. I hope I did it justice with my submission.

you did more then justice with that entry! You wrote that even better then I did...... :( Ah well, that just shows that I need to improve. It was a really great contribution though. Keep it up!