Discussion of "Taps at the Window (chapter 2 pine trees)" by ashaftergreen

... well if no one is going to comment on it I will have to do it. SOMEONE PLEASE write a third chapter. I would really love to see what someone else could do with it. -love Ashaftergreen

This is a good story....how would you like to be part of a 30 chapter story being started by me. If so,I have a story called "I Have 30 Days to Live." Click on my name and read the "I am Requesting/Needing 28 Authors....Please Read.." for more details. I will be adding your name to the list just in case....hopr you will join in....

thanks for the comment. I was hoping someone else would read the second part of that. seems like tis hard to get people to read second parts sometimes. I read your chapter, its really good writing, very like... intellegent sounding, more so then I think I could produce, however I am still considering it. thanks alot

Good continuation, ash! Still have some serious grammar and spelling mistakes, but the story is running smoothly. I like it!