Discussion of "After the Black (chapter one)" by ashaftergreen

Just wanted to make mention of the second chapter. ^_^ Its better then the first in my opinion. So, if someone actualy enjoyed the first one... the second one is better. So yeah, I am done rambling for now.(actualy no I'm not) as usual I would love to see a follow up chapter on either chptr 1, or 2. See if someone can take it somewhere else. -Later friends

Good job. Interesting twist to an age old storyline! Off to read subsequent chapters.