All Comments by ashaftergreen

This is a really random comment, I know, but I just thought I would mention how pleasent, I found the first images in your story

sorry again for the confuesion. I geuss I responded in the wrong spots. I responded to a few comments. Anyway, I hope everyone has fun with it.

I did respond, and explain why I couldnt, on one of the comments you left on one of my chapters. I am sorry I wasnt able to do it.

I did respond, on the last comment you left on one of my chapters.

I dont know why you dont get comments. I dont get a whole lot my self, however I think its pretty damn good personaly. Alittle confuesing, but I get the feeling you are not supposed to know exactly whats going on here. I like it.

Can I just say I love you for writing a follow up chapter! well I said it. lol. Okay, now to actualy read it.

I am sorry that whole thing skipped my mind competely. I dont think I will be able to do that this time, because I am actualy really busy for once. Running back and forth to pre-natal visits and what not. I wanted too, but I will let go, and let someone else do it, because I just dont have the time to commit! hopefully u will have another one up to continue. Thanks alot.

ofcoarse, theres plenty to go around. lol

Hey there. I will leave you comments! I love reading other peoples stuff, and just looking over there ideas, and they way they put things together. I have not seen you up on the stories page though. Maybe I have not been here long enough. However, later today after my busy running around, I plan to come back and read some of your stuff.

I have only been with the site for about a week or so. I really enjoy it and am glad I found it. Personaly I have really enjoyed what others had to say about my stuff so far. Good or bad, it just makes me happy to hear stuff from other people, who want to write. I have to admitt I too have atleast wanted to leave negetive comments on other users accounts, but so far I have been able to restrain my self. Sometimes its hard to leave critism with possitivity, so I dont say anything at all. I was also wondering about the featured stories. I saw mine on one day, and couldnt understand why, because I had only been on the site for a part of a day. I just wanted to know how they got there. ... As long as I am rambling. I just have to mention as I have before, how annoying it is, when someone desides to publish 6,7,8 or even more chapters in a row. It makes me want to say rotten things to them. I understand they are just trying to get noticed, by my god! What do they think the rest of us are trying to do? Pretty much the same thing, get a read, maybe a vote or two and a comment. Someone needs to tell them that they are really not that important... and waiting a day or two to post, two or three more, might not kill them. okay, I am finished, back to mashing potatos together, and fryin' up pork chops. -Ashlie

whoo hooo horraaay for 2.00 dollars! lol, I would still be happy. I am such a dork, it just pleases me to see my writing published online. Thanks for answering me on that btw, because I really had no clue. I assumed I would have to win a contest if I expected any money. Well... back to writing another random chapter lol.

I enjoyed that.

I love leaving my self comments its wonderful. Also, does anyone else think its really annoying, when someone publishes 8 different chapters on the stories page... so all you see, is there name, over and over and over again? Well I agree with me, its annoying.

Just wanted to make mention of the second chapter. ^_^ Its better then the first in my opinion. So, if someone actualy enjoyed the first one... the second one is better. So yeah, I am done rambling for now.(actualy no I'm not) as usual I would love to see a follow up chapter on either chptr 1, or 2. See if someone can take it somewhere else. -Later friends

hopefully they will do that soon. This website is pretty awsome despite its simplicity.

thanks for the comment. I was hoping someone else would read the second part of that. seems like tis hard to get people to read second parts sometimes. I read your chapter, its really good writing, very like... intellegent sounding, more so then I think I could produce, however I am still considering it. thanks alot

The beggining was pretty neat in the sence, where your kinda forced to keep reading. I like how you did that. I also thought it was serious at first, you did a wonderful job of that. I am considering a follow up chapter, however, I dont know that I could do something like that justice. Thanks for putting me on your list though it made me happy, even though it was just because I am on this site ALL the time. lol

I will rate for sure, it makes me feel important AND gives me something to do in my frequent spare time as a pregnant woman. haha.

I found it intregueing, I wanted to know what was up with everyone, What was up with the building in question, that sort of thing. I thought it was alittle hard to follow however.

poor ray, I am conserned for him. lol. You did a good job making me like the guy, before you made me worry about what you were going to do to him. Good job. I'll read more if there is more.

what a kool centipede.

Hello. I thought this was very good. It was very easy for me to continue reading all the way through and I didnt have to force my self. Seems like it would be fun to do a follow up to this one.

... well if no one is going to comment on it I will have to do it. SOMEONE PLEASE write a third chapter. I would really love to see what someone else could do with it. -love Ashaftergreen

lol, I dont know I was just thinking of possible answers. I have only been on this site for like... two days so I dont really know much. btw just out of curiousity, does anyone know exactly HOW popular a story needs to be before the author, gets a dollar or two for it? Not that I care >.> about money or anything like that. lol

yeah well, it made me laugh, and say "wow this person was original" It kinda reminded me of that cartoon tv series from a few years back (god the devil and bob) its really funny. It ofcoarse got cancelled.

fun flipping story man! My husband and I were entertained.

probobly because they want them to appear on the main story page, instead of just linked to the story it originaly came from, or on there profile page. Which is a rotten thing to do. OR maybe they just dont know. I dont know.. those are my two cents.

I am certainly glad I clicked on this. I have been hoping to find a story like this, and I love how you started it off. I am really considering writing a follow up chapter for this one, but I dont know if it would compare. Not to mention I dont know much about history. ha.

I agree, its okay not great, but I am hoping to put up some better stuff soon, when I brainstorm it haha. I thank you for the compliment, anytime someone says my writing is good, or decent, I am all smiles.

good job on the creepy situation element! lol. I was defenantly interested to se why there was a naked man.

I am sure you are tired of my comments by now. However, I just HAD to say, that yet again I really like your writing style. Its easy for me to keep up with, and keeps a good pace. You are a good mood setter.

really?! oh that makes me feel so happy. thank you very much for the feedback. I have been lurking around the site for the past hour, to see if anyone would read it. haha.

can I just say that start was awsome! I did not expect to read that. Right on for you.

I like your writing style, you set the scene well. Just thought I would say so.

I think its a wonderful idea. Gets me exited about a few story starts I have been plotting in my head. Hope to see it started up soon.

Oh I absolutly agree lol. I will look forward to reading more though, it is really good stuff.

the writing is wonderful, story had me interested from the start. However I find the angry behavior less then accurate, when it comes to stoners (they all seem nicer to me.) Still great work.

Hi! this is my first comment here. You have a wonderful start to a story going on. I am glad I came across it, thanks for being creative. The feeling the writing gave off, was really great as well. Just thought it was worth a mention.