ashaftergreen |
Date Joined: June 5, 2008
Last Login: April 26, 2009 |
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38 Comments by ashaftergreen
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ashaftergreen 1 year, 4 months ago
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This is a really random comment, I know, but I just thought I would mention how pleasent, I found the first images in your story |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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sorry again for the confuesion. I geuss I responded in the wrong spots. I responded to a few comments. Anyway, I hope everyone has fun with it. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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I did respond, and explain why I couldnt, on one of the comments you left on one of my chapters. I am sorry I wasnt able to do it. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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I did respond, on the last comment you left on one of my chapters. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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I dont know why you dont get comments. I dont get a whole lot my self, however I think its pretty damn good personaly. Alittle confuesing, but I get the feeling you are not supposed to know exactly whats going on here. I like it. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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Can I just say I love you for writing a follow up chapter! well I said it. lol. Okay, now to actualy read it. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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I am sorry that whole thing skipped my mind competely. I dont think I will be able to do that this time, because I am actualy really busy for once. Running back and forth to pre-natal visits and what not. I wanted too, but I will let go, and let someone else do it, because I just dont have the time to commit! hopefully u will have another one up to continue. Thanks alot. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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ofcoarse, theres plenty to go around. lol |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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Hey there. I will leave you comments! I love reading other peoples stuff, and just looking over there ideas, and they way they put things together. I have not seen you up on the stories page though. Maybe I have not been here long enough. However, later today after my busy running around, I plan to come back and read some of your stuff. |
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ashaftergreen 2 years, 2 months ago
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I have only been with the site for about a week or so. I really enjoy it and am glad I found it. Personaly I have really enjoyed what others had to say about my stuff so far. Good or bad, it just makes me happy to hear stuff from other people, who want to write. I have to admitt I too have atleast wanted to leave negetive comments on other users accounts, but so far I have been able to restrain my self. Sometimes its hard to leave critism with possitivity, so I dont say anything at all. I was also wondering about the featured stories. I saw mine on one day, and couldnt understand why, because I had only been on the site for a part of a day. I just wanted to know how they got there. ... As long as I am rambling. I just have to mention as I have before, how annoying it is, when someone desides to publish 6,7,8 or even more chapters in a row. It makes me want to say rotten things to them. I understand they are just trying to get noticed, by my god! What do they think the rest of us are trying to do? Pretty much the same thing, get a read, maybe a vote or two and a comment. Someone needs to tell them that they are really not that important... and waiting a day or two to post, two or three more, might not kill them. okay, I am finished, back to mashing potatos together, and fryin' up pork chops. -Ashlie |
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6 Chapters by ashaftergreen
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2.8/5.0 - published Jun 10, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
“Turn around and look at your oxygen collectors,” The man in the middle shakily rose his head up, and looked through Sarey’s legs, at the busted bits of metal and silvery scrap, scatterd about the ground. “That will be your balls if you don’t speak.”
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3.5/5.0 - published Jun 09, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Our objective was to re-create, a world of freedom. It would seem simple enough, if it wasn’t for the stupidity that seemed to wash over the lands as well as the deathly pollution.
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 08, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
so that when he returned to his homeland, he would have many stories to tell future generations of centipedes. "I should..."
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3.4/5.0 - published Jun 08, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
What was it like to stand barefoot in the grass, while the sun warmed your shoulders?
These were questions most likely on the minds of each and every inhabitant of city #48. One of the 50 left, on the contaminated planet of earth.
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3.9/5.0 - published Jun 06, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
He turned back to the microwave at the sound of the bell, and removed the wobbly bag of hot Hospital blood, I had, had frozen in the darkest corner of my freezer, for years.
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3.3/5.0 - published Jun 06, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
“Um hello?” I said sleepily wondering who was calling me at 7:02 on a Saturday morning. “Leecie?” A mans voice said softly. I knew immediately who it was.
“Leecie, don’t ignore me, I know your there… I can hear your heart beating.”
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