Discussion of "August- Chapter 3" by ariaterra

For me the sign of a very good, well written story is when I can come back to it after several weeks and pick up reading where I left off, without re-reading those chapters I'd already read. This is one of those stories.

I really like how you continue to build on the girl's character without a lot of descriptive paragraphs. The slow moving plot is...moving, and not so slowly that your readers would lose interest. I certainly haven't...;o)